再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词 。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver's carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part,the driver's negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子 。
5. 初二英语作文 ?Recently, computer games become more and more popular. Many students like playing them. And even some students spend too much time playing computer games and they don't study hard. So people think that they mustn't play computer games.
? But in my opinion, computer games will also be good for us as long as we treat it right. When we are playing them, they help us think well. And, they will help us to learn more about computer.
? So we should treat computer games carefully.
6. 初二英语作文 （5篇） 1.the life in the winter holidays This holiday season is the happiest I have been a holiday, this holiday season, I often go to the library to study, learn a lot of knowledge. At the same time, my mother in order to allow me to study hard and also accompany me Hangzhou tourism, we are playing very happy. I after dinner, we watch TV and see a lot of news, all I did not know, the holidays are too meaningful, and I will never forget this holiday 2.How can we keep Healthy in the winter Holidays It's important and problem to keep our health.So,frist we must sleep over seven hours every day.Then we can not only eat meat but also some vagetables. It can make us stronger than befer.Doing some sports are also good for our health.But please do it every day.And have a picnic is a good way that can keep our health.Finally,Don't sit to long and eat somgthing which are bad,it's not good for your health. 3.spring festival Spring Festival, Chinese New Year,is the most important festivalfor all of us. All family members get together on New Year'Eve to have a big meal.At the same time, everyone celebrates to each other.At about 12 o'clock,some parents and children light crackers.The whole sky is lighted brightly. We may watch the fireworks excitedly.How busy it is! On the first early moring of one year, many senior citizen get up early and they stick the reversed Fu or hang some couplets on the front door. Some house's windows are sticked on red paper cutlings.The Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days. So during the fifteen days, we always visit our relatives from door to door. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents,grandparents, uncles, aunts and so on. The last day of the Chinese New Year is another festival. It names the Lantern Festival. So the Chinese New Year comes to the end. 4.Protecting the Environment around us Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence. The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.5.Changes in our Hometown In the past ten years,great changes have taken place in our hometown.Take my family for example.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past,but now we call long distancd at home.And once my parents listened to radio for news and other information,but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.Another big change is in the housing conditions.When they got married about ten years ago,my parents lived in a samll room crowded with furniture,but now we have moved intwo a big new three-room apartment. In short,changes in our hometown in the past ten years have brought us comfort and convenience. 我也是九中的 为了找这5篇作文 搞的头都是大的 希望采纳 。